Teacher Comments

Further to our conversation in class yesterday, action points to take forward from the rough cut to final cut include (some of which you may have already worked on):

- Use fades to achieve softer transitions between the animated sequences with the credits, and the live action segments.
- Break up the shot with the flour tipping over with an insert to avoid using a jump cut.
- Create a soundtrack for your production company logo in Garage Band
- Replace the existing music track with the one you intend to use for your final cut (although I know this has yet to be recorded, but your plans are in place to do so on Wednesday according to our conversation)
- Remember to be shooting for a total running time of approximately 2 minutes (this looks to be happening so far)
- Is there going to be a title card with the name of the film itself somewhere in the sequence???