Feedback for our pitch

After presenting our pitch to the rest of the group, we received some feedback for it telling us the strengths and weaknesses of our presentation and the synopsis. Some of the positive comments for the analysis within the presentation was that of Toy Story there was clear descriptions and ideas and that there were some good points, which were well expressed. On the analysis of Curious George, it was said that there were good explanations because it shows how it displays itself pleasurably to the target audience. It was also said that it was good because it was genre - specific.

On the actual synopsis, it was said that the music, "i like it", originally by Gerry and the Pacemakers, was appropriate. It was also said that it was good how the ideas we have are specific to children and are things that the can relate to.

Finally, the mood board received some positive comments that it used a nice variety of child like shots and that each individual item on it was explained well.